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Okay, I suppose I'll critique the nitpicks first, then I'll get to my opinions on the piece. :) its cool grey metal fitted perfectly into her hand like it had ...

As everybody stated above, this was pretty amazing, and amusing. It's awesome how sometimes people never seem to empathize inanimate objects. The descriptions were heavy but wonderfully fitting, so th

Interesting concept. Okay, I guess I'll do the nitpicks first before I critique on the overall of the piece: The house burned in the night. The firefighters hung back, kept ...

I liked how you tried to make the story enchanting and slightly magical in atmosphere. The descriptions were thorough and carefully done, but I think there are some details that ...

The opening felt like a tour guide trying to explain to people on where they're going to go, what they will be sightseeing and this and that.... D: I don't ...

Hmm... For some reason, this feels like a generic opener for a fantasy novel. Not necessarily a bad thing, many people love reading generic fantasy books, but just not really ...

Quite a powerful piece of writing, bravo. As mentioned by some of the reviewers above, some of the description are indeed slightly too much. However, it's not really a major ...

That was a creative little story. There were flaws in grammar here and there, but I guess you could pick them out after reading it through yourself a few times. ...

That was quite an interesting opening for a story! However, I felt that you could have stretched the entire prologue a little longer. The audience should feel a more dramatic ...

Refreshing. I guess that's my first impression on this short story. The very first line with the continuation of the title was creative. Generally speaking, the entire piece seemed to ...

It was interesting. To me, it felt like a five minute interlude type of play you would get during intermissions or breaks in larger plays. It felt like a Beijing ...

Indeed, it's a wonderful book. In fact, it's my favourite book. I couldn't get enough of it, so I read twice in less than two weeks! If you like novels ...